Matt McCormick - Toastmasters Speech #4 - The Dirty Secret of Work

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My 4th Toastmasters speech in the Competent Communicator's manual. Titled the Dirty Secret of Work. I would appreciate feedback on my speech especially the flow of the speech and whether it kept the audience engaged.
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First laugh came very quickly. That is always a bonus. Subject matter of working too hard was a great way to get everyones attention, because we all want to get paid more and work less.

Move with purpose. I know the room setup makes it difficult to move with purpose. Get comfortable standing still. Being comfortable standing still will help eliminate what appears to be fidgeting. Great humor!
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good start

got really bored 2 minutes in, needed to make the link between working less in quicker