TheGemHunter - Melody Byrd (International Speech Contest)

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Ms. Melody Byrd was my first Story Coaching client. She came to me with three speeches under her belt. After a little more than a month I coached her to a third place win in the District Level on the International Speech Contest.
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Good opening with motion and a painted picture. Great gestures and enthusiasm. Well use of subtle humor with a tough story.

It took a while for me to figure where the story was going but I got it at the midway point.